Here is the first cut of the short film - Left Unread.
I know that I am not happy with:
• The walking shot down the corridor, to shakey - Reshoot
• The voice over need to be recorded and then replace the existing voice over.
• The walking shot are too shakey and the continuity is out.
• Audio level need work.
• Tea scene is not fast enough - Reshoot
I now need to show my first cut to my media teacher for feedback on what and how I can improve the film.
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