Fourth Cut and Feedback

Here is the fourth cut of the short after the improvements from the third cut have been added.

Feedback:
• The introduction is much better - title, fade in, timing etc all works.
• The new POV shots from the bus look great
• I'm not sure if you need the shots of the protagonist getting off the bus. Try cutting at 1:22 straight to 1:26
• Camera at 2:05 is not needed
• And the one at 2:14 also can be removed... kind of gone the other way and overdone them now. :-)
• Ending is better... the timing of the BB shot needs to coincide exactly with the 'gun shot' sound.

The only other suggestion I would make is that you should consider editing the montages to be a little edgier... applying an effect or two to make them a little grittier/manic would add to the feeling they're there to evoke.

Almost there... tis all in the tweaking.