Initial Plot Outline:
- Set within a prison cell, the male protagonist is sitting down on a chair with a duffle bag, next to him. He is facing forward and has no expression on his face.
- A jump in time, the protagonist is walking behind a prison guarded down the corridor.
- The protagonist is signing him self out of the prison and walks out and away from the prison.
- He is sitting and waiting for a bus at the bus stop. When the bus arrives he gets on. (This is all shot at a distance and does not follow him on to the bus.)
- In side the bus, facing him over the chair, the protagonist is staring out the window watching the world go past.
- Cut to a long shot of the view out of the bus. Voice over by protagonist.
- The protagonist gets off the bus and walk home down the street, the camera tracks him.
- He looks around constantly, this sequence is intercut with shots of people, place and CCTV cameras.
- The protagonist enters his house.
- There is a change in time.
- He is sitting down in a chair in a room that looks like it should be a living room but there is only the chair in the room. A ticking clock can be heard. (Long Duration Shot)
- Change in frame and he gets up out of the chair is walks out of the room.
- The next the audience see is him in the kitchen. He is standing aimlessly in the middle of the room.
- He puts the kettle on, a montage of him making coffee begins.
- There's only two things in the cupboard a coffee and a cup, the entire cupboard is empty apart from these items.
- After the coffee is made he leaves the kitchen, and enters the living room and sits down.
- Many continuous shots are then shown from different angles and framings of the protagonists sitting in a chair drinking is coffee, time passes and nothing happens.
- The sound of the letterbox opening and closing can be heard, the protagonists turned his head to face the direction.
- He gets up and proceeds towards the front door and the letterbox.
- On the carpet there is a flyer that has the heading stating "The revolution will be complete when the language is perfect."
- He got a flyer and turned around and walks back into the living room.
- Night falls and he remained in the living room in a chair.
- The morning comes he gets out of his chair leave the house, (making care to step over the flyer) and walks down the street.
- He enters the newsagents and go straight to the newspapers.
- All the papers have headlines that mirror that of the flyer from the previous day.
- He buys one of each newspaper returns home.
- When he gets home he immediately burns them in the fire.
After this I now feel that I need to begin to consider how I would like my short film to end and as I am having a split ending with the audience decides how they want the short film to conclude I need to script and decide upon the plot for both endings.
Interesting ideas... and well plotted.
ReplyDeleteBut the question remains: Can you do this in 5 mins?