First Cut

Here is the first cut of the short film - Left Unread. 

I know that I am not happy with:

• The walking shot down the corridor, to shakey - Reshoot

• The voice over need to be recorded and then replace the existing voice over.

• The walking shot are too shakey and the continuity is out. 

• Audio level need work.

• Tea scene is not fast enough - Reshoot

I now need to show my first cut to my media teacher for feedback on what and how I can improve the film.